Some people think individuals are more and more dependent on each other, while others believe that individuals are more and more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the progress of modern society,
interpersonal
relationship becomes an important issue and it is discussed constantly among Add an article
the interpersonal
people
. The argument that Use synonyms
people
are more and more relying on each other is both agreed Use synonyms
and
disagreed with by many. The two sides of Change preposition
upon and
this
argument will be analyzed and discussed in Linking Words
this
essay.
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Firstly
, those Linking Words
people
who strongly believe that human beings deeply rely on one another in Use synonyms
this
fast-paced society are not Linking Words
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a minority
the minority
minority
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minorities
For instance
, it will be impossible for young couples who work around the clock to leave home for doing a job if they do not have their parents or nannies to assist them in taking care of the kids. Linking Words
Thus
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people
are more likely to depend on a helping hand in order to make a living. Use synonyms
This
is why some Linking Words
people
claim that individuals are more dependent on each other.
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Nevertheless
, some Linking Words
people
argue that humans are becoming less reliant on others. Due to the development of modern technology, there are tons of smart-home appliances that can provide a vast range of support and help in Use synonyms
people
’s everyday lives. Namely, a robot cleaner that will help to sweep Use synonyms
floor
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the floor
everyday
and it charges itself after finishing every task; auto-cookers that can make meals automatically and working families will find them super convenient and time-saving. Replace the word
every day
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
makes it clear that humans are getting more independent with the help of highly developed technology Linking Words
Correct your spelling
instead
in stead
of requiring others to take part.
To summarize, the two sides of the argument concerning Correct your spelling
instead
humans
dependence and independence Change noun form
humans'
human's
of
one another have strong Change preposition
on
supports
. Fix the agreement mistake
support
However
, after Linking Words
thorough
analysis of both sides, because of the high-level specialization in Add an article
a thorough
this
contemporary society, my perspective is that Linking Words
people
are still heavily reliant on others in order to live a better Use synonyms
live
.Replace the word
life
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