Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for the average person. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Some governments around the world try to build new sports
facilities
for professional athletes rather than building common sports Use synonyms
facilities
for the community . Use synonyms
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countries
would able to produce international sporting Use synonyms
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, it is very unlikely that Use synonyms
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development would help the uplifting the Linking Words
health
of the common man . Use synonyms
Hence
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writer believes , Linking Words
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new development is more positive than negative and in the following essay , he is going to discuss it Linking Words
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To begin
with , sport is an important component of human life and some Linking Words
countries
try to gain popularity and pride over other Use synonyms
countries
by producing big sporting personalities . Use synonyms
Moreover
, to produce these international sporting Linking Words
stars
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countries
would invest billions and they made new modernized sporting complexes for practising their sporting Use synonyms
stars
. To illustrate Use synonyms
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, Americans have invested billions of dollars to build new sporting complexes to produce new athletes and they have been able to achieve their goal by winning most golds in the Olympics.
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On the contrary
, most people oppose Linking Words
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concept claiming that Linking Words
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money would be used to develop common sporting Linking Words
facilities
, that can be used to improve the physical Use synonyms
health
of common people. Use synonyms
Furthermore
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health
of their citizens, most Use synonyms
countries
would be able to reduce their mortality rate due to heart diseases and reduce the Use synonyms
health
cost . Use synonyms
For example
, according to a report published by the World Linking Words
Health
Organization , in 2018, Finland was able to reduce their mortality following heart attacks by 50% compared to the previous decade , mainly by improving the sporting Use synonyms
facilities
for their citizens.
In conclusion , even though some Use synonyms
countries
would able to develop international athletic Use synonyms
stars
by providing specialized training Use synonyms
facilities
to them , most would suggest improving common sporting Use synonyms
facilities
for the public , which invariably improve the public Use synonyms
health
of a country . Use synonyms
Hence
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this
writer strongly believes that the negative development of governments invest to improve individual sporting personnel than the public in whole is, far more than its positive developments .Linking Words
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