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The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate parents about good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The percentage of teenage
crime
 is constantly increasing, and some people think that the best solution to alleviate
this
 situation is educating
parents
 on better parenting skills. I am afraid I have to disagree with
this
 opinion since parenting does not play an essential role in youth
crime
 as they expected. On the one hand, teaching
parents
 how to educate their
children
 might not reduce the rate of underage
crime
. The
first
 reason is that those
parents
 are the workforce of their household, and the free time that they can accompany family members is limited as social pressure drive their employers to try to seize every minute of them.
That is
 why even some
parents
 are educated about better parenting skills. When they lack communication time with their
children
, playing a moral model and teaching is impossible.
Moreover
, most young offenders are still in their rebellious phase, so it makes it difficult for them to listen to the teachings of their
parents
, who usually spoil them.
On the other hand
, there are some ways to reduce minor crimes that might be more efficient than educating
parents
. To cite an example, schools could add courses about the law to their curriculum in order to raise their awareness of legal and
crime
, ensure they have respect for law and let those young potential criminals think twice before they commit a
crime
.
Furthermore
, setting mental consultant services in schools, particularly in remote areas where young
children
 live alone with their grandparents. Some cases indicate that many students suffer from mental problems, like anxiety caused by the absence of
parents
. Those sensitive
children
 in adolescence who have no access to psychological relief are more possibly to break the law. So, providing therapy for these minors can release them from the urge, making them use violence or other extreme ways to solve problems in daily life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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