Some people today struggle to use modern electronic technology such as smartphones and computers. Why do you think this is? What can be done to solve this problem?

There is no doubt that some people today, especially the elderly age generation
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using modern technology immensely difficult for themselves.
This
is mainly because when they grew up they never saw
such
types of gadgets that are easily available now, the invention of modern technology took place in the
last
two decades.
However
, there are
few
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methods that can be implemented to resolve
this
issue. One of the reasons people find it difficult is mainly because the majority of elderly groups are
firstly
not interested in using modern gadgets. Examples Laptops,
Smart phones
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or Tablets. They never got used to it, as in their times they used to have simple keypad phones with a small screen on
it
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them
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without any other features more than calling in it. as not like present generation
smart phones
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smartphones
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.
This
can be solved if they ask for
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assistance from the younger generation to show up the functioning of these modern
devices
, and they can get familiar with it.
However
, the main reason is
also
that they were never attached or used to it. As we can see boys and girls even from their early ages are getting addicted to modern gadgets and
that is
in their early age of learning, as it results in
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of modern technology much easier for them as they grow up.
Moreover
, if old people start using them more
oftenly
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often
, learning some new features like making video calls to their
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ones, they can find it more interesting and it will maintain their interest in learning and adapting modern
devices
. In conclusion, the more they find it difficult to use modern
devices
the more they struggle to use
it
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. Only when if they start using basic applications and getting assistance from the younger generations for
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operating these
devices
, will
this
problem be remedied.
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