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some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for goverments to make it a legal requirements ? To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Certain people are of the consensus that sufficient
garbbage
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garbage
 from households is not recycled. They are of the opinion that in order to increase recycling, a legal mandate should be implemented by the government. I firmly believe that
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laws
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 will aid in the process of
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 recycling.
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Throughout
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 for
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 recycling along with substantiations wherever possible.
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 with, many a time, individuals are unaware of the proper disposal of
waste
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 into garbage bins for the purpose of recycling and
instead
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 of
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waste
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 in proper bins, they are littered in places, where it becomes difficult for the collection trucks to pick up the
garbbage
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garbage
.
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, a well defined legal framework will not only make people aware of the right way of dumping
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 but will
also
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 ensure that a quantum amount of
waste
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 is collected for the purpose of recycling.
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, in Europe, there is a law ensuring that there is a monetary penalisation for anybody throwing
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garbage
 in any other place other than the nominated place. At the same time, another reason, why the process of
waste
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 recycling is hindered, is due to improper
waste
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 segregation. If the solid scrap gets mixed with the liquid
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,
then
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 it becomes difficult for recycling and not enough
waste
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 is
availaible
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available
 for recycling.
Consequently
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, one way of tackling
this
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 issue is to have
seperate
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separate
 dust bins for solid, liquid and soft wastes,
besides
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 having a law in place, which enforces individuals to follow the proper process of throwing the
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 as per the type.
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 in Dubai, there are
seperate
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separate
 dustbins based on the type of
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 to be thrown, with legal
repurcations
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reputations
reputation
 in the form of
fine
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 or public service if the citizens are not abiding by the correct method of throwing different
waste
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. To conclude, Individual negligence and faulty
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 disposal patterns are the primal reasons for not enough
waste
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 being accumulated for recycling.
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,
such
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 issues can be corrected by having proper
laws
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 by public institutions.
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, I am of the opinion that
laws
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 are very much necessary for more recycling of
waste
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.
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