Government should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

Some
people
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that authorities need
make
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citizens
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the responsibility
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responsibility
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for taking after their own local
environment
. I totally agree about
this
problem above.
First
of all, it is necessary for each citizen to have the responsibility to protect the
environment
because the
government
cannot have enough time and conditions to handle all environmental problems in each locality. The
government
's time is mostly invested in policies to promote national development in all fields
such
as economy, politics, education and culture.
For example
, when
people
organize their own environmental protection activities
such
as planting trees, picking up trash
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coast and so on, the authority has found a way to improve the country's development.
Therefore
, not only the
government
but
also
the
people
need to be responsible for protecting the
environment
. Environmental
pollution
also
indirectly affects
people
's health, so each resident plays an important role in protecting the surrounding living
environment
. Society is a common
environment
for thousands of
people
, so when
people
have a sense of voluntary protection of the
environment
, it
also
means that they protect their own lives.
For example
, when
people
don't care about the surrounding living
environment
, what is the cause of
pollution
in many sources of the same level
such
as water
pollution
, air
pollution
, atmospheric
pollution
and so on.
This
will directly affect
people
's healthy milk, forming diseases of the respiratory tract, cardiovascular system. I completely agree with the view that the
people
and the
government
together protect the
environment
and balance the ecosystem because
this
is an urgent issue for
people
in particular
and nature in general. Let's join hands to build a clean and beautiful green world.
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