Government should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

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that authorities need

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citizens

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for taking after their own local

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. I totally agree about

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problem above.

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of all, it is necessary for each citizen to have the responsibility to protect the

environment

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because the

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cannot have enough time and conditions to handle all environmental problems in each locality. The

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's time is mostly invested in policies to promote national development in all fields

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as economy, politics, education and culture.

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, when

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organize their own environmental protection activities

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as planting trees, picking up trash

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coast and so on, the authority has found a way to improve the country's development.

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, not only the

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but

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the

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need to be responsible for protecting the

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. Environmental

pollution

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also

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indirectly affects

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's health, so each resident plays an important role in protecting the surrounding living

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. Society is a common

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for thousands of

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, so when

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have a sense of voluntary protection of the

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, it

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means that they protect their own lives.

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, when

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don't care about the surrounding living

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, what is the cause of

pollution

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in many sources of the same level

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as water

pollution

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, air

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, atmospheric

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and so on.

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will directly affect

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's healthy milk, forming diseases of the respiratory tract, cardiovascular system. I completely agree with the view that the

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and the

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together protect the

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and balance the ecosystem because

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is an urgent issue for

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in particular

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and nature in general. Let's join hands to build a clean and beautiful green world.