The alarming rise of sexual assault in the country has led to calls for the death penalty to be imposed by law, but there are some who think those rapists should be made to suffer for life. What is your opinion on this point?

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enforced by regulation while some

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that they should not get

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penalty must

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to the rapers because

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might able help to decrease the cases and to protect the preys from

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criminals

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numerous news of sexual assault which especially happen with children and adults. To stop

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severe situation, it might seem over brutal for the rapists, but giving harsh

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to them make them afraid of the laws and end the actions.

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of them. There are those who argue that some countries face

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the problem of sexual assault which their government can not handle with it. Due to

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,

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and the rules not too strict enough to control the rapists.

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, these problems should be solved by the increasing strict of laws.

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, victims must always be aware of their surroundings all the time to be safe from the

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. In conclusion,

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, the

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punishment

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must use with the rapists due to the fact that it might assist to reduce the problem as well as

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the victims from the illegals. People can get rid of sexual harassment reports by rising serious

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similar to

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penalty to make the raper fear to behave.

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to be fearful of strangers.