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Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the connection between
news
 and
real
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life
 and the waste of time reading the
news
 every ritual day. While
this
 statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that it may do more harm than good.
News
 is associated with social
life
 and plays an important role in daily
life
. Newspapers and television are the media that update the latest
news
 in all aspects of
life
 so everyone can know the latest and hottest
information
 wherever they are. Without
news
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,news
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 we wouldn't be able to know what's going on around us and make appropriate judgments and attitudes.
For example
, during the outbreak of the covid 19 pandemic, many
people
 cannot leave their homes, so it is necessary to update
news
 from the media to know the epidemic situation and how to prevent it.
On the other hand
, not all
news
 needs attention and attention, but readers need to select the correct
news
. Today there are a lot of tabloids specializing in spreading false
information
 in order to distort
people
's thoughts for personal purposes.
For example
,
news
 that exaggerates the Covid 19 epidemic situation causes
people
's anxiety and leads them to have wrong understandings.
Therefore
, being selective and careful when receiving
information
 is an important thing to not be fooled by false
information
. To sum up,
news
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the news
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 is an indispensable thing because of its roles and impacts
in
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on
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 human
life
 so we need to update it daily.
However
,
people
 should not trust unscrupulous
news
 sites to get accurate
information
.
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