Q) The Internet is generally considered as a blessing for mankind. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Internet
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has a dynamic effect all over the
world
. It is regarded to be a blessing for humanity in many ways. But whether it has more benefits than demerits is still a controversial issue to be debated.
This
essay will delve into both the beneficial and detrimental aspects of
scientific
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world
. On the one side, the positive effects of
web
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the web
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is
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enormous.
To begin
with, people who are separated by distance gets connected by
internet
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the internet
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. It allows
face
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to face interaction with families who are miles away.
For instance
, during earlier times it was not possible for a dad or mom away from home for work like working abroad or meet their families once in a while to see the growth of their children living with their parents in
native
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country. But, today with innovation and technology, they are just a phone call away. By
this
, relationships can be maintained without a crack in the household.
Furthermore
,
cyber space
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provides vast amounts of information.
For example
, the war between Russia and Ukraine or things happening around the
world
can be known by searching web sources like Google. Everything is readily available on the
Internet
. Social
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media
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medias
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play a major role among the youth. They can keep in touch with their old friends or chat with new people through Facebook, Instagram, etc.
Also
, all
sort
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of study materials
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available online now which can help students to achieve good grades. On the other side, misuse of
Internet
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can cause big problems. Nowadays all children are addicted to social
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media
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medias
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. They spend too much time scrolling through it. They could utilise
this
time for lessons, being with family, or playing with friends. Looking too long can cause health and mental issues. And
also
, these networks are becoming a place for anyone to comment on
others
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life. Healthy discussions are appropriate but in these times,
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cyberbullying
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cyber bullying
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cyberbullying
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is often taking place.
This
is a clear case of non-social activity. To summarise, living in a
world
without
Internet
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is almost impossible in the current scenario. But, the way it is being used by
different
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person
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makes it good or bad. I think if used in a good way, the advantages of
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outweigh the disadvantages.
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