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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities, Others, however, say that this would have littel effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

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Certain
people
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 believe that having many
sports
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 infrastructures is the perfect way to promote the
health
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 of many
people
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.
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, others argue that
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 can hardly change anything unless a different approach is made to
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. Personally, I believe
people
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's
health
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 can only get better if they are included in compulsory keep fit activities and get incentives as well. Constructing multiple
sports
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 facilities can have some positive effects on the public's
health
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 in general. Many currently are unable to engage in any sort of exercise due to the fact that
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 buildings are limited ,and are located too far.
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, building more of
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 places would mean that many
people
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 would easily access them at numerous nearby locations.
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, in the country of Zambia, it was noted that soon after the construction of several training centres in Lusaka city, many societies' well-being improved greatly.
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, more numbers
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 centres provide more opportunities for
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 to stay fit. Despite those few benefits, many
people
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 including myself believe having countless numbers of
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 infrastructures would not alter the crowd's fitness for the better. The public can be forced to do many things but participate in exercising. It is because so many
people
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 are kept busy at work and in their lives that they do not have enough time and energy to spare for strengthening their Take,
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, in a survey conducted on the effects of long working hours on
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's fitness, it was determined that many failed to take part in
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 activities due to the fatigue they got from their places of work.
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, it would help if companies or schools where
people
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 spend most of the time, came up with a compulsory
sports
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 day and offer incentives to all for participating. By way of conclusion, even though many might resort to increasing the number of
sports
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 centres as the means to improve public
health
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, I believe that since
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 can not be forced to participate in
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, it would be appropriate to promote
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 day at their workplaces or schools and give them prizes.
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