While people flood into big cities to seek jobs and happy life ,there is a tendency for people to move out .What problem do big cities have?

Well, big
cities
are indeed an aportunity to find a job. You might find a jod that it suites you very well, it is harder to find a job in smaller
cities
witch makes you happy. I do understand that there is a tendency to move into a big
cities
. The particular reason for the circumstance is that you want a succesfull and a happy life for your famliy. I am not saying that in the smaller
cities
you wont be succesfull but, in the big
cities
the chanses are bigger. While too many peopel flood into a big
cities
, it will bring of cours problems witch I am going to mention it in
this
essy. 
First
: The citiy wil be very busy,
for example
if you have an apointment somewhere in the citiy it is going to take a lots of time to get there. other than that if you are lucky you wil be on time if not you might be late at your apointment.
Second
: There wil be a higher cost of leving in the big city,
this
actively demonstrates that you have to pay a lot than your are use to pay in smaller
cities
. If you dont have a well payed job, its going to become a big problem in order to ensure that everything is payed for.
Third
: Always verey noisy,
this
means you have to deal whit loud noises that the cars or trains and other transport motors are making. If you like to enjoy the silence it would be a huge problem for you to live in a big city. To sum up evretthing that has started so for i would say for those who are happy and succesfull in the smaller
cities
, it would't be a mistake to stay there end enjoy the life together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overpopulation
  • Housing demand
  • Public services
  • Cost of living
  • Pollution levels
  • Air quality
  • Traffic congestion
  • Commuting
  • Crime rates
  • Income disparity
  • Infrastructure
  • Public transport
  • Green spaces
  • Urban heat
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