Some people argue that spending a lot of money holding birthday parties, wedding parties and other celebration is a waste of money. However, others believe such parties are important for individuals and for society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Spending on the celebration for some people is a waste of

money

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but others think it is important for individuals and for their society. I think

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we should spend

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on special days but too much spending regularly is a waste.

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of all, we earn work hard not just for basic things like food, clothes but

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to enjoy life. Celebrating an important event like a wedding is

important

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expense.

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, we spend for my sister’s wedding and it was good as my cousin from another country came and he met my sister’s friend and got married. So, the celebration can give chance to met peoples so it is important for family and for society. Spending too much on small events like a

birthday

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party

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or Diwali

party

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is a waste of

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. A large family will need more

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to celebrate all kid's

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birthday

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birthdays

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for

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instance, if my family of six want to celebrate all four children’s

birthday

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in a good restaurant with a few friends and family

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we need four to five thousand dollars per year on

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birthday

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a birthday

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party

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is big

money

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which can be used for swimming or sports coaching

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of wasting. To conclude, we must spend

money

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on important events in life but spending too much on small regular events is not required and better to avoid. In my opinion, spending once in a few years for a wedding is okay but spending on a

birthday

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or small Diwali

party

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is not good.