Many wild animals are on the verge of extinction. What are some reasons for this? How can animals be protected?

Extinction

of species has always existed and does not only exclusive to the twentieth century, but the superfluous rate of distinct species'

extinction

is a novel

concerning

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phenomenon that has been happening in

this

century. A great number of reasons and solutions are being suggested by experts. The following essay will overlook two of those rationales which are proceeding by a solution.

To begin

,

lives

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of living creatures are not immunized to the changes

of

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the environment they are living in.

For instance

, the best temperature that each species can survive in is specific to them and a slight increase can result in the death of thousands of them, and the effects that global warming can have on them is

balatant

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blatant

.

Thus

, one of the obvious reasons

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this

event is the lack of

humans'

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attention that should be paid

on

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nature.

Moreover

, illegal hunting is another concerning reason that has caused a lot of

animals

death

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over

last

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decades.

Although

there was a considerable decrease in illegal hunting recently , it is still occurring in developing countries as a means of earning money.

Consequently

, a great deal of

animals'

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extinction

has ensued by prevailing of

this

business. Despite the above-said reasons being grave, the solution is feasible. The government as the most responsible authority of a country can play an important role in preventing more

extinction

.

Firstly

, by imposing rules against the industries which have the greatest impact on

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nature, it can not only help the

animals

but

also

save the Earth.

For example

, forcing factories to use

the

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renewable source of energy reduces

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waste as an integral risk factor of increasing temperature.

Secondly

,

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illegal hunting should be controlled by

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strict supervision and dedicating essential budget for doing that.

Therefore

, if the government intervene,

this

problem will be solved gradually. To sum up, the extravagant increase in

animals

' deaths and their subsequent

extinction

are rooted in

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environmental changing, like global warming,

in addition

to

the

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illegal hunting. I believe that the government's interference is needed to control both issues.