Your Overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. • Thank him for the invitation & accept the invitation. • Write detail about your visit. • Briefly describe what you want to do there.

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Dear Harman, I hope

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letter finds you well. I was very happy after receiving your letter where you have asked me to visit India. I would love to visit you

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summer. I have booked a ticket for Indian Airways for 12 May 2022. I will reach Delhi Airport on 13 May at 5pm.

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, my return ticket has been confirmed for 1 June 2022. During the trip, I would like to travel to different places all over the country which I could not see when I was a child.

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, I wish to see the Taj Mahal which is one of the seven wonders of the world.

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, historic places like Amritsar, Fatehgarh Sahib and Hajoor Sahib will be suitable for travelling.

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, it will be a good idea to recall all our childhood memories and

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, I would go to all those locations where we had fun in our childhood. I hope to see you soon. Best regards, Aman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

163 words

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