Your Overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. • Thank him for the invitation & accept the invitation. • Write detail about your visit. • Briefly describe what you want to do there.

#friend #visit #country #invitation #detail

Dear Harman, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I was very happy after receiving your letter where you have asked me to visit India. I would love to visit you

this

summer. I have booked a ticket for Indian Airways for 12 May 2022. I will reach Delhi Airport on 13 May at 5pm.

Moreover

, my return ticket has been confirmed for 1 June 2022. During the trip, I would like to travel to different places all over the country which I could not see when I was a child.

Firstly

, I wish to see the Taj Mahal which is one of the seven wonders of the world.

Further

, historic places like Amritsar, Fatehgarh Sahib and Hajoor Sahib will be suitable for travelling.

In addition

, it will be a good idea to recall all our childhood memories and

therefore

, I would go to all those locations where we had fun in our childhood. I hope to see you soon. Best regards, Aman

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