Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or short of money . Others argue that it is better to improve such situations .

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
In the fast-paced ,world we are living, it is unavoidable to encounter difficult situations and challenges along the way. There are some individuals who argue that it is ideal to accept unfavourable occurrences rather than solve or improve them. I am of the view that it is better to do your best to improve and solve unexpected problems. Admittedly, no one in
this
Linking Words
challenging world is exempted to experience difficulties, surprises, and blessings as long as we are alive.
This
Linking Words
is inevitable. Many people are being challenged in their daily lives like having family problems, financial shortages, business bankruptcy and the like. There are those who failed to solve those difficult circumstances, did not achieve their goals, decided to let it go, accept what happened and not do something about it to improve and to resolve it.
For instance
Linking Words
, in business, it is improbable not to encounter tight competition with other companies. There are young entrepreneurs who are not properly trained in handling and managing problems inside the company like financial accounting .
This
Linking Words
will result in the total closure of their businesses because they already accepted that the business is failing.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, some people are brave enough to face different situations be it surprisingly good or extremely bad. For them, failing is not an option, it is their motivation for them to perform their best to become a better person, achieve their goals and inspire others.
For example
Linking Words
, in job promotion, I have experienced being one of the candidates for a managerial position; it was indeed a great opportunity but I failed to claim that position.
Instead
Linking Words
of beating myself up, I prepared myself for the
next
Linking Words
evaluation. My failure helped me to become motivated and inspired to achieve my goal. Luckily, after a few months, I got the promotion I have been eyeing for years. In conclusion, it is improbable not to experience unexpected challenges
although
Linking Words
there are those who believe that it is satisfactory to just accept it; there are those who assert that it is best to make it a motivation to improve their difficulties in aiming target. From my perspective, we should be motivated by all the failures and challenges we may have encountered.
Submitted by josa1328 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: