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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, both mixed education and same-sex
school
 are popular, for
this
 reason, Guardians have different options to consider before
school
 enrollments. Some individuals believe that coeducation
provide
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 youngsters with
necessary
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 expertise for a lifetime. While others argue saying unisex
school
 pupils accomplish higher education with better results.
This
 essay will discuss both sides and I will give my perception. On one hand, scholars who attend
single sex
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 high
school
, record
low
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 number of sexually transmitted ailments and teenage pregnancy,
as a result
 of inadequate time to form sexual relationships with the opposite. For
this
 reason, the government saves money from medical insurance henceforth diverting extra income to public sectors by building modern infrastructure.
For instance
, in the year two thousand and ten, a Washington based researcher published data pertaining to reduced transmission of intercourse related illness between male-only and
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 schools.
Furthermore
,
this
 type of educational system prevents
gender based
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 violence and sexual harassment, as a consequence of, isolated unisexual
school
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schools
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.
Therefore
, reducing mental
health related
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 conditions among the students.
On the other hand
, the opponents argue by saying coeducation builds future politicians and motivational speakers. By virtue of, mixed- schools being able to build individual
self esteem
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 by offering a platform
to
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 kids to interact with opposite genders through communication,
thus
, nurturing future public speakers who are fluent.
For example
,
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intersex
school
 debate
club
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clubs
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provide
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 the necessary skills to build
self confidence
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.
In addition
, the weaker gender
gain
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 knowledge by challenging their competitors, in order to outsmart the opponent
consequently
,
improving
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 academically. In conclusion, both sides
has
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 merits on balance,
however
, in my perception, I believe prevention of diseases and
gender based
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gender-based
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 violence is
worthy
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 while.
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