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Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others refer groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #lessons #groups
Few people desire learning alone, while others prefer group works. Both have
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 same aim, but different methods.
Firstly
, I should mention what one-on-one lesson means. It is
studying
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 process which contains a teacher and a student, only.
This
 process
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 learners who cannot work with others. They are not able to share
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their opinions and concentrate ideas among people. They tend to work and learn alone. They do more self-study
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 disciplining
way
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 the contrary for
this
, we have another
way
 of studying preferred by many is
collective
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 method in which students are required to work in groups. In
this
way
, learners have a chance to share their ideas with their groupmates in order to discuss and clarify whether they are right or mistaken in some cases. In my view, studying through team works is better than
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 learning process. Because
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 it is
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 more interesting and effective
way
 of brainstorming. When you have many views, you have many chances to think about different sides of what you are learning. It gives you an opportunity to find
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 key, best
way
, of your field. But, it is
also
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 fact that there are some people gaining their goals working alone. They do their best without any help. They are
selfconfident
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self-confident
self confident
 and hardworking learners which can break some life rules like strength is in unity. So, which
way
 is the best depends on how powerful and reasonable we are.
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