Finding job satisfaction is considered to be a luxury in many developing countries. Why do you think that is? Do you think that job satisfaction is important?
In today's world, several nations in the world specifically the developing ones, do not offer satisfaction at
work
which means finding this
quality at the workplace is not optional. This
is due to the fact that job
opportunities are rare in these places. In my opinion, I believe that working happily in a work
environment is substantial because it is the key to success.
It is beyond any doubt that working happily in developing nations does not exist. Because there is a scarcity of jobs in these countries. For example
, here in Egypt where I live, I am the only one in my nuclear family that managed to secure a job
. That is
why the main focus for people who live in these countries is to secure any job
that can pay their bills. Therefore
, they do not care about being satisfied or not at their work
.
Being happy at the workplace is the key to success. As professional happiness could boost employees' creativity and encourage them to do more. For instance
, Amazon is one of the companies that provide a nice work
atmosphere to its staff, which is why Amazon managed to push the boundaries. Thus
, it gained trust worldwide and was recognized as one of the top-notch companies in its field.
In conclusion, it is often thought that professional satisfaction is rare in several communities around the world ,especially the developing ones. That is
because people in these communities are struggling to find jobs. I think that having professional happiness is crucial as it could boost success in the workplace. It is therefore
recommended that developing nations should devote more funds to their infrastructure to attract more investors and create more job
opportunities.Submitted by aymanshabakaa on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite