You have recently been on a vacation in a foreign country and stayed at a home-stay, you have realised that you have misplaced an expensive wristwatch and cannot find it. Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you.

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Dear Mrs Anderson, I am writing

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letter to bring to your notice that I have misplaced my RADO wristwatch during my stay on the recent trip to Switzerland.

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, I am Neha Jaiswal and I have stayed at your condo apartment from 25th-29th Mar2022 where I forgot my watch which has always been very precious to me as it was gifted by my late grandfather and was his

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memory to me.

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, the watch was embedded with real American diamonds and was very expensive. It has a golden strap and my name is embedded on the backside. I remember I had left the watch near the pool play area after we had a ravishing experience at the pool party. I would request you to look for the watch and courier it back to me at the below address. C-12-3, Palava Phase2 India. Looking forward to your co-operation and prompt response. Yours sincerely, (Ms) Neha Jaiswal

Submitted by nehajaiswal4220 on Mon Mar 28 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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9 paragraphs

157 words

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