Advertising has become part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising has a positive impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In
this
present-day
world, it has to be said that commercial ads
are very salient in day
to day
life; they can make lives
easier and problem-free.People
can buy products
depending on their use;ads
exhibit the usage and availability of that appropriate product
in the market.Moreover
, sometimes, it may provide information about their brand and quality when it has counterparts in the market.Apart from that, most of the advertisements are entertaining and stress-buster in this
fast-paced life.I agree with this
theme and this
essay will enunciate my agreement with this
notion in detail with appropriate examples.
To commence with,it is indeed an irrefutable fact that commercial short videos have a tremendous role
in our lives
such
as people
can choose the right product
from the right brand if it has counterparts in the market.Next
,ads
are entertaining and give relaxation sometimes.Another thing is commercial films can introduce a new product
to the public and its usage.For instance
, a study was conducted by scholars of IIT Mumbai about the salient role
of ads
in day
to day
lives
.The result shows about 80% of people
say that advertisements improved their lifestyle and they are happy with that.
To continue, it is paramount to consider middle class and lower-middle-class people
while showing an ad film through social media and television;those people
have a wish to buy the branded product
;but, due to overpricing it may not fulfil all the time.Majority of them waiting for offers on branded products
through ads
.Those kinds of advertisements are beneficial for ordinary people
.For instance
, a piece of news was published in the Hindu Newspaper about the imperative role
of ads
in normal people
's lives
;about offers and discounts on their products
,about 80% of ordinary people
are following this
kind of ads
.
In conclusion, it is proven that commercial short ads
have an imperative role
in everybody's lives
; to know about offers and discounts.Moreover
, to get details about new products
that help to an easier life.Submitted by mariyatresavarghese on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite