In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural areas which can negatively impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in developing countries? What could be done to solve this problem?

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In today's world, several nations the world, especially the developing ones are struggling to find decent
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in the
countryside
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.
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, children in these areas could suffer the consequences
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having a low-quality education. In my opinion,
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difficulty could be due to the lack of well-developed
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in rural
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which make these
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less attractive to
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. In order to solve
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the government should devote more resources to developing the
infrastructure
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in these
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to lure more
teachers
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to go there.
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with,
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developing countries could be reluctant to
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at rural schools because of the bad
infrastructure
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that the
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might have. Even though the housing there could be cheaper than
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city, they prefer to
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in the city.
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is due to the fact that cities have more amenities.
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, in Georgia which is a developing nation in Europe, you can easily find a Zoo in Atlanta, while in Elberton you can barely find one. It is
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cities in
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countries are more attractive to people including
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. In order to solve
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difficulty, governments of developing communities should devote more resources to improving the
infrastructure
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in the
countryside
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, which could encourage more
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to
work
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in rural areas.
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, governments could improve the accessibility to rural areas by improving the quality of roads.
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, they could improve the public transportation system in these
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. If that happened, more people will prefer to
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in
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countryside
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the countryside
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including
teachers
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, the education quality could be improved. In conclusion, rural societies in
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developing nations cannot find professional
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is because they prefer to
work
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in cities that have good
infrastructure
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. It is
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recommended that more funds should be spent to improve the
infrastructure
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in rural
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to encourage more
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to
work
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there and eventually improve children's education.
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