Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
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vaccination
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Parents
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humanity since everyone were vaccinated and it will decrease the number of early childhood death.
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On the other hand
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parents
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others like they became crippled. Few suffered entirely by utilizing crutches and others became totally futile. Change preposition
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Consequently
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parents
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. In the long run, the youth will immensely suffer the consequences of not Correct your spelling
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.
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being vaccinated
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to the drawbacks it may bring to the body. At the end of the day, Wrong verb form
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the freedom to choose the best for their children Change the verb form
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either
to get vaccinated or not.Correct word choice
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