Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

Early childhood diseases

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the major

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of death globally. Meanwhile, new discoveries

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vaccines

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essential to humankind.

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rate could be diminished once

vaccination

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the vaccination

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law is abided by the public

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some

parents

are against

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it. On the

first

hand, following the scheduled immunisation chart is imperative

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children for

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to maintain the optimum health level in

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a way they will not be easily contracted

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different bacteria and viruses.

For instance

, following the implemented rules of government to bring the child

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.

Parents

must adhere to the policy since it will give their child the necessary maximum protection.

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humanity since everyone were vaccinated and it will decrease the number of early childhood death.

On the other hand

, some

parents

preferred not to immunise their

offsprings

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because of the side effects that they have had observed in vaccinated

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.

For example

, polio

vaccination

in the Philippines has bad effects

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others like they became crippled. Few suffered entirely by utilizing crutches and others became totally futile.

Consequently

, guardians tend to follow their human instinct not to receive any form of

vaccines

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.

However

,

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parts

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Africa

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could not receive

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the vaccine

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vaccine

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even though

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their parents

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wanted to due to the fact that

government

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vaccination

fund is not enough. Children are extremely malnourished and early

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their

death bed

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. In the long run, the youth will immensely suffer the consequences of not

vaccinated

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. In summary,

vaccination

is crucial to

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childrens' immunity

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to the drawbacks it may bring to the body. At the end of the day,

parents

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the freedom to choose the best for their children

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to get vaccinated or not.