You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning to go skiing next winter and you would like to get a group of friends together to come with you. Write a letter to a friend and invite them to come skiing. In the letter, Invite your friend to come Provide details of the holiday Tell your friend what they will need bring with them on the holiday You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Pavel, How are you? I'
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sorry it's so long since I was
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in touch. I'
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writing to you because I'
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planning a short holiday next winter in the Austrian Alps. In the Austrian Alps
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a great town for skiing named Ravensburg. Every winter is there a lot of snow and perfectly maintained hills for snowboarding and skiing. I planned our holiday for the first week of January. I found out
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called Golden Star where they still have free
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apartment
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for rent. The
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is for 4 people and it is fully furnished.
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is pretty close to the skiing complex. Because
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the
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is fully furnished you need only your skiing equipment like
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a snowboardand
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snowboardand
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snowboard and
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winter jacket and don't forget your helm again. It would be great if you let me know as soon as possible and I can book
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great
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. I'
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looking forward to catching up. Cheers Petr
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coherence cohesion
To improve coherence and cohesion, consider revising some sentences to sound more natural in English. For example: 'In the Austrian Alps is a great town...' could be 'There's a great town in the Austrian Alps...'
task achievement
For task achievement, include a few more details about the trip, such as transportation arrangements or any planned activities beyond skiing.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a friendly and inviting tone, well-suited to the context of writing to a friend.
complete response
You successfully provided necessary information regarding the trip, including location, accommodation, and what to bring.
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