There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the Internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a good or bad thing? 250 words

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Today there is a big problem
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copyright materials
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as music, films and books are freely available on the Internet resulting in
owners
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of the works losing
money
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. I will talk about I think that
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is a bad thing for the
owners
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of the
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because they spend almost all their time working for the
work
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but after they send it online some
people
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will copy it and
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lead to the creator losing cash.,
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the author will not want to keep on creating because their
work
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will be copied by
people
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lead to talented
people
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quitting
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area. For ,
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example you have a musical group you have to pay them
money
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and they will make new music but the unwanted
people
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will copy it and lead to the group of
people
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losing
money
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so the
money
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you earn is less than the cash you pay the group. On the other ,hand it is good for the fans of the
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because they can listen, watch and read the creation of the creator freely without paying
money
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. For ,instance a movie that you like is on but it needed
money
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to watch you can go to the website that can watch it freely
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is thanks to copyright or else you will have to pay for it to watch. In ,conclusion copyright materials are a bad thing for the
owners
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because they will lose
money
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but a good thing for fans that don’t want to pay for the
work
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. But in my ,opinion it is a bad thing because the
owners
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who lose
money
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will not want to create anymore
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will lead to less and less good creation in the future.
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