A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet

Dear Asad, I am writing

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letter to share important information and instructions related to my flight date, caring for my house and pet.

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with, I am glad to inform you that my ticket has been confirmed for the 25th of May at 11:30 pm from Allama Iqbal International Airport Lahore.

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, I want to explain the daily routines of my cat, named 'Lee'. The breakfast time Lee is early morning and about 8:00 am you will give her a shower. Afterthat, please give her a ball and she will play with it in the drawing room. She is not used to do lunch so you don't worry about it. Most importantly, please try to biol chicken and cut into small pieces for her dinner and give milk at late night.

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, you can clean house 3 times a week and don't forget to fill water-bottles from the filter. On every weekend, a street cleaner will come to the house, so give him $50 and put in your account list. Eventually, remeber to check the door locking before sleep on every night. Hope to meet you soon. Best regards, XYZ

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet

Fully explain your ideas

Universities and colleges are now offering courses through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.

A friend of yours is going on holiday and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter recommend a good place that you have visited before for a holiday say where you went and where you stayed say what you can do there and what the food was like

These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

Some people think that it is best to live in a vertical city (meaning that people work and live in high buildings) while others think a horizontal city is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.