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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. What do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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In
this
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 day and age, the process of globalization has been increasing throughout the
last
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 two decades. The development progress of nations reached a peak in the era of cutting-edge technologies due to citizens can purchase or sell similar
goods
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 around the globe by using the internet market. From my perspective, it has more plausible sides rather than negative ones. On the one hand, To be grateful for the internet and an international policy, there are so many availabilities and opportunities for
people
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 who are willing to acquire any necessities for their life-long
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.
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: Ali express and Amazon companies are the most well-known and trusted internet market on the planet of earth. There are so many latest modern technological devices that could be bought online, and
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 those devices would be delivered to your resident on
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.
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, these kinds of opportunities offer cheaper and more useful
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 depending on residents' wishes.
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, citizens are not required to spend priceless
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 going to markets or department stores that might be located abroad.
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, it is unavoidable that ordering to buy
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 from another country is taking a risk for individuals since those
goods
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 might not suit or face human beings' desires.
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, one of my acquaintances bought an expensive watch via an online application when he saw the watch, his feelings were not so happy at that moment.
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,
people
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 should read suggestions and comments before buying any items for themselves. In a nutshell, Developed countries'
people
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 have the same opportunities as developed countries' citizens because of
people
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 can buy and sell any
goods
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 at any
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.
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, it has
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 some merits and demerits of
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 development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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