Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Music is

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of the best enjoyment in our daily activity and it raises someone's mood, and get them excited. In my opinion, the

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does not only entertain us it is

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of the best career choices

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. some nation thinks that the soul is only refreshment and other citizen says opera is a large impact on the association. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides and I will give my opinion.

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with, some community start their life by playing songs and most people choose their career options like singing and playing instruments.

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, they give stage performances and some governments use the rock to give awareness of the nation what they want to tell

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many people

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benefit from singing in many ways.

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,in cinemas tune plays

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of the best roles without singing some movies are not interested to watch and many people earn in

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field like music directors,singers,instrument artists.

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gives

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relaxation in their lives. on other hand, some crowd need

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only when they feel bored they do not feel it is important for civilization.

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, some humans listen to reduce stress and anxiety. rap boost memory ,build task endurance.

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,some community use it when they travel or do some work they can use it for interest purpose.

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, the

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is an important part of our soul as it is a way of expressing our feelings as well as emotions. Some nations consider opera as a way to escape from the pain of life. It gives you relief and allows you to

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stress. In conclusion, singing is

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of the best remedies to reduce pain and it will give energy to our lives and I think it is not only entertainment it is the impact on society

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listening to melodies gives more relaxation to society.