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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some individuals have their beliefs that it is in the best interest of the rest of the
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, where
information
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 that has been gained in scientific research, business and academics
world
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 should be passed along amongst
others
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. Whereas, there are other people that have their view that passing along valuable
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 too easy can only be a disadvantage. In
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 essay, I will explain both sides of
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 and share my own opinion. To start with, sharing important pieces of
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 with
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 could give the possibility for these individuals that receive it to share valuable
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 back.
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, if people in these different worlds were to give each other details as well as feedback, they would have the ability to receive both positive and negative
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 back. From there, they will have a chance to correct their mistake and
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 be able to continue with their project.
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, if a businessman were to have some beneficial detail, that would contribute to the scientist's work and would share
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 along it could potentially lead to something huge that could change the course of his project.
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, giving out details that are valuable too easy could lead to it being placed in the wrong person's hand. In saying that, there are humans in
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world
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 who do not believe in other individuals' right to live their lives as they please.
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, in the middle east where the terrorist rules where if they received that
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, it could be used in a negative way to harm
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 and have the chance turn into a disaster.
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, it has been shown in a recent study done by NATO, that if we were to pass around
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 both good and bad around the
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 for everyone to gain, it could be used in either way. To sum up, it is beneficial for people in
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different parts of the
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 to give
others
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 significant knowledge, but there is
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 a risk factor when doing so.
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, I think it is more important to protect civilians than everyone having access to all the
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. It is crucial that researchers around the globe share facts that would help each other as long as it is safe to do so.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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