In the future cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be the passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future, vehicles will
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to drive automatically without the need for drivers.
While
there are some drawbacks associated with travelling by these
cars
, I believe the main benefits are more substantial. On one hand, a principal advantage of using driverless
cars
is that accident car rates will
reduce
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because these
cars
will be programmed to obey all rules related to driving on streets and highways.
Therefore
, mistakes that occur
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human error will be reduced significantly.
For instance
, they will obey all the traffic rules and will not drive more than a limited speed in high ways. Another primary advantage is that people have extra
time
on the way. Since there will be no need for people to drive, they will be able to use their
time
for other things.
For example
, passengers can spend their
time
in the car reading books or newspapers.
On the other hand
, a potential disadvantage of driving in driverless
cars
might be no human to control them which is terrifying. As they are just
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machines that are not able to think and decide, they will not
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to analyze the situation.
Thus
, they will be not safe and trustworthy. A
further
perceived benefit is these vehicles will not repair themselves and they require a person to fix them when something
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to them. To illustrate, when their engine
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a problem and
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not work correctly, they cannot move.
To conclude
, it is true that driving with
cars
that will have no driver would seem disadvantageous under certain circumstances.
However
, in my view, its positive effects in terms of obeying the rules
as well as
having more free
time
override the advantages.
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task response
Make sure to fully address the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles in the essay.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear introduction that introduces the topic and a conclusion that summarizes the main points and provides a final thought.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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