Some people fail in school , but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case ? What is the most important thing to succeed in life? (TYPE 5 – TWO PART QUESTİONS )

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get great achievements in school
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person in future. I assert that it can
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luck and have a
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during
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period. There are manifold following ways to get success in life.
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, I believe that luck
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because with the help of
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position not only in society but
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, Indian prime minister Mr.
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, because he does not get enough study due to their lack of interest
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education but he
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prime minister with the help of
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good luck.
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,
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working
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makes
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perfect.
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, during the school time period mostly children do not take study too serious because they are immature but in
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life when they
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to become perfect adult they start to do hard work to achieve their goals.
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, many things play a crucial role to
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succeed
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foremost, best communicable skills because if
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humankind
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great these skills they easily get a good job and a higher position in their lives.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic performance
  • aptitude
  • resilience
  • perseverance
  • networking
  • interpersonal skills
  • entrepreneurial
  • innovation
  • creativity
  • practical experience
  • real-world application
  • career advancement
  • drive
  • motivation
  • life-long learning
  • opportunities
  • non-traditional paths
  • adaptability
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