Now a days modern modes of transport are available; still some people believe that a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the quarter of ,2021 I had followed many essay competitions for sustainable issues that focused on food and the environment with microbiology assistance. I participated in the field because I did read and research through many websites

such

as Z-library about sustainable foodstuff and nature articles and books by foreign researchers, mostly from India.

Moreover

, I attended a writing digital marketing webinar was sponsored by Google that explained how to influence people to buy products through reading a text on social media advertisement posting . Based on research activities and a soft skills webinar, I produced an essay-writing formula for joining many essay championships. As the result of many events, I won one that was held by the Food Technology and Agroindustry Faculty of Matram University for the national

second

winner about food sustainable solutions from algae. The final result gave me to improve my ability in writing skills for other fields

such

as articles and a story. More clear, I was chosen to help my friend in media for the InovTek Expo 2022 wrote an article about opening day 1 of the Expo for social media posting. It was held by Badan Riset Daerah NTB (BRIDA) and one of the shows for welcomed Motor GP Mandalika 2022, Since I had entered Senior High School, I helped my father in Iqro’ and Alqur’an teaching kids around my home between Magrib and Isya time. I taught them with knowledge from my dad and engaged based on insight from my Islam teacher and friends during Qur’an reading time.

For instance

, I told a good pronunciation for many of the characters and I taught them with my father's method is shadowing my mouth. I was totally thrilled when they did it well and told their mom that influenced me to be a better teacher similar to my father. The best part was when my dad’s students finished 30 juz and their parents came to my home for thanking the already taught children until they graduated. It can tight relationship between two households immediately.

Thu Mar 31 2022

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

341 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Now a days modern modes of transport are available; still some people believe that a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Write a letter to a local restaurant that is very noisy. In your letter Introduce yourself Describe the problem Say what actions you will take

Some people say that studying at school is not important because most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree?

Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.to what extend do you agree or dis agree.

Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that. Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?