Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that rapid

expansion

of

supermarket

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in some countries, many small, local

business

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businesses

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are able to compete and local

business

will bring about the

develop

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development

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of local communities.

However

, I firmly believe that

this

expansion

brings threats

for

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local

business

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businesses

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instead

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in stead

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instead

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of chances.

To begin

with,

supermarket

expansion

provide

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more choices for local consumers, which means local

business

have more competitor.

Supermarket

usually

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built in a large area

with

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a huge scale and consumer benefits a lot from it. They have more

choice

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choices

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from all over the world with import

products

or high-end brands that

never

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appear

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before. And local brands

also

have more

competitor

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competitors

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, which

are have

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a huge

of

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investment from rich people all over the country. Making small

business

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businesses

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are downsizing their scale to

operates

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efficiently. According to a recent survey in

Donghoi

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Donghai

, a small city in Vietnam, the appearance of a huge mall

that

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makes the revenues of traditional

market

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markets

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and

business

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businesses

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decreased

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up to 15

percent

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. Clearly that if

small

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a small

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business

does not do anything, they can

be disappear

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in the future. On top of that,

consumer

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consumers

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have a tendency to

using

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products

from

big

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the big

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company

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companies

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rather than small

business

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businesses

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. Since the

third

industrial revolution,

products

are being

shiped

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shipped

from all around the world.

In addition

, globalization makes individuals generally want to buy

an

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international

products

or even

products

that

made

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by giant

exclusively

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company.

For instance

, Laotian are usually attended by import

products

. They worship it and the result

are

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their local or small company decline

revenues

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in revenues

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significantly.

This

a

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popular example

about

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the fame of big

coperations

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corporations

. To sum up,

supermarket

expansion

providing

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more choices for

consumer

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the consumer

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and their fame

also

catching

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catches

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customers

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attention. For these reasons, it is clear that the

expansion

of

supermarket

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supermarkets

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brings the death of

local

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a local

the local

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business

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businesses

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.