Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that rapid
expansion
of Use synonyms
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supermarket
in some countries, many small, local Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
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business
are able to compete and local Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
business
will bring about the Use synonyms
develop
of local communities. Replace the word
development
However
, I firmly believe that Linking Words
this
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expansion
brings threats Use synonyms
for
local Change preposition
to
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business
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businesses
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instead
in stead
of chances.
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instead
To begin
with, Linking Words
supermarket
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expansion
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provide
more choices for local consumers, which means local Change the verb form
provides
business
have more competitor. Use synonyms
Supermarket
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usually
built in a large area Add a missing verb
are usually
with
a huge scale and consumer benefits a lot from it. They have more Change preposition
on
choice
from all over the world with import Fix the agreement mistake
choices
products
or high-end brands that Use synonyms
never
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have never
appear
before. And local brands Wrong verb form
appeared
also
have more Linking Words
competitor
, which Fix the agreement mistake
competitors
are have
a huge Change the verb form
has
of
investment from rich people all over the country. Making small Change preposition
apply
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business
are downsizing their scale to Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
operates
efficiently. According to a recent survey in Wrong verb form
operate
Donghoi
, a small city in Vietnam, the appearance of a huge mall Correct your spelling
Donghai
that
makes the revenues of traditional Correct pronoun usage
apply
market
and Fix the agreement mistake
markets
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business
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businesses
decreased
up to 15 Wrong verb form
decrease
percent
. Clearly that if Change the spelling
per cent
small
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a small
the small
business
does not do anything, they can Use synonyms
be disappear
in the future.
On top of that, Change the verb form
disappear
consumer
have a tendency to Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
using
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use
products
from Use synonyms
big
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the big
a big
company
rather than small Fix the agreement mistake
companies
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business
. Since the Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
third
industrial revolution, Linking Words
products
are being Use synonyms
shiped
from all around the world. Correct your spelling
shipped
In addition
, globalization makes individuals generally want to buy Linking Words
an
international Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
products
or even Use synonyms
products
that Use synonyms
made
by giant Add a missing verb
are made
exclusively
company. Change the adverb
exclusive
For instance
, Laotian are usually attended by import Linking Words
products
. They worship it and the result Use synonyms
are
their local or small company decline Change the verb form
is
revenues
significantly. Change preposition
in revenues
This
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a
popular example Add a missing verb
is a
about
the fame of big Change preposition
of
coperations
.
To sum up, Correct your spelling
corporations
supermarket
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expansion
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providing
more choices for Wrong verb form
provides
consumer
and their fame Add an article
the consumer
also
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catching
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catches
customers
attention. For these reasons, it is clear that the Change noun form
customers'
customer's
expansion
of Use synonyms
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supermarket
brings the death of Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
local
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a local
the local
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business
.Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
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