It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child’s development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role.

Many people believe that the biggest influence that affects a child’s development are external factors

for instance

media, pop culture, and

friends

. While other people strongly believe that family has a bigger effect and is the most significant role. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before the conclusion is reached. Nowadays,

children

have to go to school five days per week. They meet their classmates almost every day. They

also

spend a huge time using the internet. Some

children

might face their

friends

or media more than their parents. For

this

reason, these external

causes

are important to

children

.

In other words

, things they are familiar with are the most influence

However

, most

children

live with their family: father, mother, or grandparent. They grow up with their parent's morals and follow the way they were taught.

In addition

, diet and nutrition that

also

affect

children

's development are mostly selected by the parents.

Consequently

, it is undeniable that parents are

also

a major factor in their growing up. In my perspective, young people are easily made to follow. They always believe in their

friends

who have the same age and want to be like each other.

For example

,

children

in the same lifetime will dress in the same way and be markedly different from older

children

.

Moreover

, they have the same liking

then

they easily understand and get into each other. To summarize, both external

causes

,

such

as

friends

, pop culture, and media, and family as internal

causes

play a significant role in a child’s development.

Although

my opinion is that external factors have more effect,

children

need both factors to build their growth. They cannot grow up either external or internal

causes

.

That is

to say, the more their environment is better, the more their growth becomes better