You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, say: ● why you need to use this private room ● what you need them to provide for the party ● inquire about the price of the food you are ordering

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Dear Sir or Madam: I am a local resident of Sydney, writing to inquire about the booking of a private room in your

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. We are going to celebrate my sister’s birthday party on 7th April with some of our private guests. I would like to know the facilities that we can expect at your

hotel

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. I would be wondering if you could provide us with one projector and a large screen as we need to share some wonderful memories of my sister at the event. We are expecting 30 guests on the occasion so if you could arrange the

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accordingly

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. I was hoping

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you could share with me your

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menu so I can decide on dishes as we want

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event to be distinctive for us and we want to make it remarkable. My sister loves Italian food and I heard your

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is famous for Italian cuisine, so kindly if you could

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arrange some good Italian dishes for the occasion. I look forward to hearing from you soon

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and thank you for your attention to

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matter. Yours Sincerely, Tom Holland

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

Provide more specific details about the party requirements and inquire about the availability of private rooms to improve task achievement.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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