You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, say: ● why you need to use this private room ● what you need them to provide for the party ● inquire about the price of the food you are ordering

Dear Sir or Madam: I am a local resident of Sydney, writing to inquire about the booking of a private room in your
hotel
. We are going to celebrate my sister’s birthday party on 7th April with some of our private guests. I would like to know the facilities that we can expect at your
hotel
. I would be wondering if you could provide us with one projector and a large screen as we need to share some wonderful memories of my sister at the event. We are expecting 30 guests on the occasion so if you could arrange the
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accordingly
. I was hoping
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you could share with me your
hotel
menu so I can decide on dishes as we want
this
event to be distinctive for us and we want to make it remarkable. My sister loves Italian food and I heard your
hotel
is famous for Italian cuisine, so kindly if you could
also
arrange some good Italian dishes for the occasion. I look forward to hearing from you soon
,
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and thank you for your attention to
this
matter. Yours Sincerely, Tom Holland
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
Provide more specific details about the party requirements and inquire about the availability of private rooms to improve task achievement.
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