Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be used better elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A group of people claim that government spending on money for

art

is useful for individuals.

However

, others believe that money may be used somewhere else. I partly concur with the

second

opinion and will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs. To commence with, there is no doubt that

art

plays a vital role in human life due to the fact that people describe themselves with it since the earliest times of human beings. To exemplify,

first

humans used to draw pictures on the walls of caves to communicate with others or express their feelings.

Furthermore

, it is beyond any doubt that

art

is associated with human emotions

such

as love and hate.

Therefore

, the arts have a huge impact on mankind.

On the other hand

, the crowd who believes that governments expend their

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on various fields

such

as infrastructure or education since these are has a more vital role for them in daily life than

art

. For

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, in Turkey, education is a mainly huge problem to be considered and authorities attach importance to faculty and educators.

Moreover

, the economy

also

has to be taken into account.

For example

, in my city, Eskişehir, citizens have the challenge to afford their basic needs in daily life due to the deteriorating economy.

Hence

, there are many fields to be more prioritized by the officials. In conclusion, the impact of the arts is inevitable for humans and the development of civilization.

Nevertheless

, governments and municipalities should prioritise and invest more

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fundamental needs.