Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be used better elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A group of people claim that government spending on money for
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is useful for individuals.
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, others believe that money may be used somewhere else. I partly concur with the
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opinion and will elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs. To commence with, there is no doubt that
art
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plays a vital role in human life due to the fact that people describe themselves with it since the earliest times of human beings. To exemplify,
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humans used to draw pictures on the walls of caves to communicate with others or express their feelings.
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, it is beyond any doubt that
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is associated with human emotions
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as love and hate.
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, the arts have a huge impact on mankind.
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, the crowd who believes that governments expend their
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on various fields
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as infrastructure or education since these are has a more vital role for them in daily life than
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, in Turkey, education is a mainly huge problem to be considered and authorities attach importance to faculty and educators.
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, the economy
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has to be taken into account.
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, in my city, Eskişehir, citizens have the challenge to afford their basic needs in daily life due to the deteriorating economy.
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, there are many fields to be more prioritized by the officials. In conclusion, the impact of the arts is inevitable for humans and the development of civilization.
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, governments and municipalities should prioritise and invest more
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fundamental needs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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