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Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many older people do not exercise enough. What could be the reason for this? What can be done to encourage them to physical activities?

#doctors #people #exercise #reason #activities
Nowadays,the majority of doctors consider that
people
 who are 65 years old and over should often keep fit.
However
, a wide range of older
people
do
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 not follow
this
 recommendation for
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reason
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 which should be taken into consideration as well as
to promote
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same
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 ways to encourage these
people
 to enhance their daily exercise.
First
 and foremost, it is an undeniable fact that many elderly
people
mistekenly
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mistakenly
 feel that they are
uncapable
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incapable
 to increase their daily physical activities.
For instance
, being retired , they
prefer
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 follow a
sendetary
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sedentary
 lifestyle and
staying
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glud
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glued
 to their television screens
instead
 of going out and doing
gym
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 or going
for
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jogging.
In addition
, some of them are not aware of the benefits of exercise for their health and believe that keeping fit is a needless activity.
Finally
, another example is that many old
people
 consider that taking their medication is the only contribution
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 their health care and as
result
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 they are not
intersting
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interesting
 to take part
to
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 new physical activities. For all the above reasons, it is urgent to encourage the older generation to enhance their physical
developent
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development
. A case in point is the governmental
intervation
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intervention
, as the authority should launch campaigns to motivate old
people
 to engage in new activities.
Moreover
, media should raise these
people
's awareness of the multitude of advantages of
keeiping
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keeping
 fit in their routine
though
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 some educational television programs as well as informative
advertisments
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advertisements
.
Last
 but not least, the new generation should help them by taking
with
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 them to the park or for a walk. In conclusion, it would be a great initiative to encourage older
people
 to follow a better lifestyle for their overall physical and mental development. I firmly believe that the key
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longevity is between prevention and treatment ,for
this
 reason taking up a new exercise is one the best way to keep your mind and your body healthy
in
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 the same time.
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