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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem? Explain the idea with relevant example.

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Just like any other developments, there are advances made in agriculture
thses
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these
 days,
such
 as efficient irrigation
system
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systems
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, organic farming est. The advances in
agriculre
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agriculture
 greatly
increase
people
's quality of life, but unfortunately, it doesn't benefit all
people
. Many
people
 around the world still suffer from starvation. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the reasons
to
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this
 problem and what can be done to solve it. 
These
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There
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 are various reasons behind
this
penomenon
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phenomenon
.
Firstly
, it is the uneven development of technology.
Although
 advancements are made nowadays, they are mostly in developed
countries
. The
people
 in well-developed
countries
 have organic farming and can access
to
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healthy
food
 in an approachable way.
However
, the
people
 in
third
 world
countries
 do not have
the
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efficient methods to enhance their farming activities. Some of them still use the traditional agriculture practice, which is hard to
increase
 the amount of the products.
For example
, in some areas in Southeast Asia,
people
 still raise rice by hand, it is more time-consuming
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than
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 mass production by machine.
Secondly
, the uneven distribution of the
ariculture
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agriculture
agricultural
 products is
also
 the cause. We all know that some
of
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the
agriculre
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agriculture
 products are cultivated in developing
countries
, but
people
 in these
countries
 still suffer from starvation, because what they cultivate may transport
to
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them to
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 developed
countries
.
People
 in these developed
countries
 need to export their
food
 to ensure the counties' economic development while
sacrifice
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sacrificing
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 the local needs at the same time.
For example
, coffee beans in South Africa are transported to
the
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Western
countries
,
although
 they might suffer
food
 issues themselves. There are some methods or policies
can
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that can
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 be done to solve
this
 problem. The
countries
 with
advance
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agriculre
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agriculture
 technologies could share their methods with the less developed
countries
 to
increase
 the
food
producation
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production
, and it will benefit the global as a whole.
Also
, the
countires
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countries
 that export
food
 to other
countires
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countries
 should ensure that the gaining revenues from the export should be used on the local
people
 in the
first
 place. In conclusion, the advances made
in
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greatly
increase
people
's quality of life,
however
, certain adjustments need to be made to ensure
the
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 fair share of
the
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food
 production.
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