Every year, several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
advanced world, various
languages
are started to extinct. A part of society advocate that
availability
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of
few
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a few
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languages
would be more
advantages
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so having
lot
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of
languages
in
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not incredible. I have mixed
view
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views
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regarding
this
assertion. Beginning with the merits of having
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of
languages
,
first
and foremost is that every country has its own
language
which is origins from its
culture
so
language
confer
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uniqueness to every
culture
, as well as,
language
and
culture
both have
inevitable
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relationship between each other which
connot
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can not
be
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deniable
. Meanwhile, every
language
make
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their natives more clear with their heritage and confer
them
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information. Take China as
example
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, in
this
country they speak
Chinese
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the Chinese
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language
which has unique words with
same
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meaning and has many words which have different
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meanings
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according to their
culture
.
Consequently
,
importance
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of
language
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can not
be
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Ingoranle.
On the other hand
, having few
languages
bring many advantages concerning the globalized world, due to globalisation whole world is converted into
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a small
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village , if the counting of
languages
is less
then
it would be beneficial for survival not only
this
, it
also
leads
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growth by
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including
the business which is only with few
languages
, because
presence
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the presence
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of few
languages
remove
language
barrier among residents and assist them to start their business with other
countries
.
Moreover
, it
incline
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job opportunities for
younger
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populace by making them able to deal with natives of foreign
countries
. Research conducted by BBC,
for example
,
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reveals that English is
most
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a most
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preferable
language
which
increase
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the progress of many developing
countries
by making people able to join the business of multinational companies.
As a result
, few
languages
also
make
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in
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the development of
countries
. To sum up, even though we
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can not
deny the importance of various
languages
but the advantages of
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languages
concerning da growth of
countries
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can not
be
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are
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Ignoreble
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Ignorable
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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