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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Generally
speaking
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 some
people
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 did not achieve their grades in school, but ended up being successful in their careers. I believe
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 that for successful
life
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scores
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 are not important. Managing capability and way of
communication
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 are the keys to an excellent career. The below paragraphs will discuss
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 things to be succeeded in
life
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. As a matter of fact,
people
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 who did not score high in , the future those
people
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 will be in good positions. Most of the students who fail examinations have more knowledge than any others. Not only the knowledge but
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 good
communication
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 makes them more successful.
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 most of the students are poor in writing part.
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 might be the reason for getting lower
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.
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, the most successful person Kapildev is bad at writing part.
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 are not the important eligibility criteria to be succeeded in
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.
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,
communication
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 and behaviour play a key role to get settled in
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. The most important thing to get well settled is smart
work
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.
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, smart
work
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people
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 will do their
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 faster than hard
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people
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. To illustrate
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, most business magnets are successful only because of their behaviour and way of speaking. The person who get more score and he do not know how to communicate with others, will not make any sense. Most of the top rankers get their
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 by mugging up the content not because of understanding. On the whole ,understanding the subject and way of
communication
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 are the keys to get success in
life
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. In conclusion, mainly parents should not pressurize their children to get more marks. Everyone should know the ways to get settled in
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 and do not get depend on their
scores
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. Being smart is the key to a successful career.
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