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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the prices of fast food will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today's era, Obesity has become a major problem in the world as
people
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 are gaining a lot of weight. There has been an ongoing debate among
people
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 about whether increasing junk
food
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 prices will solve the prevailing issue or not. I, partially disagree with the opinion as
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 who are inclined towards fooding will buy it, irrespective of an increase in the amount of the particular commodity.
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food
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 plays a pivotal role in maintaining overall health, eating
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 that does not include any nutritious value not only harms our physique but
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 introduces health problems.
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,
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 as Chinese and continental have very fewer nutrients in them
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 they have an immense amount of fats and carbohydrates in them.
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, consumption of bad oil
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 affects the body of a particular person by raising the cholesterol level. Taking into consideration an increase in the value of fast
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 will not be a solution to the problem because
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 who are addicted to it find ways to purchase it.
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,
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 in Western countries
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 of increasing prices still prefer to buy snacks as they are easily available and it is not a hassle to eat them.
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, hectic work hours make it more difficult for
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 to cook it at home, so they prefer to dine out. In conclusion, it would be great if restaurants provide
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 with options that are more healthy and easily consumable,
people
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 will switch towards better
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 habits which in turn make their life a better life to live in.
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