Some people think that hosting international sports events may be beneficial for a country. Discuss both views.

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Olympic
football
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game makes the
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public known for the city in recent years. A vast number of
people
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have a variant sight opinion about the advantages may give to the
country
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when hosting one of
the
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global events
such
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as sports.
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essay will discuss both arguments and provide that
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more detail and examples. Hosting international events can create many negative influences
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as pollution and expensively problems. The world cup
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the
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football
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match
lead
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to causing traffic.
Firstly
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, that may happen when smoking or have cars with a huge number of visitors come to support their
football
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teams than
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celebrating
via fireworks.
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,
to find
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a place
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place
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places
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for tourists to stay through
olympic
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times, it may cause to rise sharply
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rent
of
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housing price
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the
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food prices. For
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reason, that will affect directly local
people
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living game
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, may not be able to purchase some specific type of food supplies.
On the other hand
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,
people
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think that hosting international sports events may give
great
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opportunity for a
country
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to keep growing and
development
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in
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invariant
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variant
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a variant
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sector
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. To provide that, by
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given with sports competition
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as swimming or
football
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and tennis...etc. The city that holds
this
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game will be famous across the world.
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, that
award
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country
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the country
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chance to come
foreign
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to foreign
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people
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to taste their
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food and know more about their cultures and traditions. Meanwhile, during these competitions holds in the
country
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across
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way will aid to an
increase
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economy sector which is made from the payment of
transporition
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transportation
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and rents. To conclude, both sides of view
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a special point
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throughout
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through out
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their situation in life and the
poistion
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position
of financial.
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