A man called Pete who is friend of friend, is planning to visit town. Write a letter to Pete. In your letter introduce yourself suggest somethings to do in your town mention one thing you would not recommend

Dear Pete, I hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am Maninder's friend and he told me that you are planning to visit Delhi next month and want some basic information.

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, I am writing

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letter to give you a few suggestions for your trip. Delhi is the capital city of India, and it is famous for its food and historical monuments.

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, I strongly recommend you to pay a visit to Old Delhi, where you can try some of the authentic

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foods.

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, I would

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suggest you

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visit monuments like India Gate, Red Fort etc. , which would give you an insight

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age-old history and culture.

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, I wish you a memorable and joyous stay

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, I would like you to refrain

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alone in the city, because it is a big and crowded city and you can easily get lost. I hope these suggestions are useful to you and if you want any more information, I will be happy to serve you. Yours lovingly, Jatinder.

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Dec 29, 2024

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Consider providing more detailed information or suggestions for activities in Delhi to enhance the letter.

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Ensure to signal a transition to a new idea with appropriate linking words or phrases.

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The letter effectively introduces the writer and suggests activities to do in Delhi.

coherence cohesion

The structure of the letter is logical and easy to follow, enhancing readability.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a friendly letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

182 words

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