The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now
These maps presented what's the centre of the small
town
Islip
is now and its construction planning Change preposition
of Islip
in
the future.
Change preposition
for
Overall
, there will be more buildings in the north of the town
, and the original main road
will be displaced into a pedestrian crossing, all
of the architecture will be surrounded by a new circle Correct word choice
and all
road
.
Now, there is the main road
going through the centre of the town
, and there are department stores on the two sides of the road
. The government is planning to build a bus station, shopping centre, car park, and new housing on the north side of the main road
. And so the main road
will be only used by pedestrians, cars are no longer allowed to enter in. They are projecting to build a dual-carriageway for car use, which will connect the school, housing and park in the south part of the town
.
It can be expected that there will be more housing buildings in the circle of the carriageway, thus
, people living here can hang out in the park which is close to those apartments. In the north of this
town
, the countryside will be developed and become a part of the town
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