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Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

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These days competition between experienced applicants and graduated ones for a particular
job
 is arising. In
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 find a remedy to solve them.
One
 of the problems of recruiting is choosing among many applicants of different ages with
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divers
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 experiences. On the
one
 hand, older ones are more rational than youngers and they are adopted
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 circumstances sooner as they know
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atmosphere
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 of working is like and how they should interact with their new colleagues.
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 for a young
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 we should spend days or a month to learn them how to ask a simple thing from a co-worker properly or
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 a polite request to seniors. But
on the other hand
, youngers are so motivated and unlike older
people
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 a slight opportunity inspires them to work hard and show their accomplishments to be promoted if possible. It is necessary for employers to find a solution for making a balance between their staff in terms of age and experience. It
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 acceptable to pick up just from
one
 side. Considering the type of
job
 and duties of the target person can be helpful whether it is allowed to spend time to train someone irrational or making human mistakes which are unavoidable are not allowed and are accompanied with sad consequences so older or reasonable
one
 is preferred to decrease them.
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 part manufacturing industry a slight mistake in
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 effect on the quality can lead to
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 a company needs energetic personnel
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 experienced ones to lead them.
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 for the same
job
 and location the kind of
job
 which is associated
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can be helpful to pick up
one
 person among applicants , they must regard young employees can be human assets for long-term purposes and older people should be updated and motivated enough to carry out their duties impeccably.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Intergenerational competition
  • Age discrimination
  • Adaptability
  • Hiring practices
  • Workforce diversity
  • Upskilling
  • Lifelong learning
  • Flexible working arrangements
  • Ageism
  • Technological proficiency
  • Productivity concerns
  • Diverse skillsets
  • Legislative protection
  • Employment equity
  • Biases
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