Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and diseas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Man-made

pollution

has

became

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a challenging problem over

last

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century,

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is increasing with significant speed over the world.

Moreover

, rapid population growth and subsequent lack of their accommodations have

acompanied

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accompanied

it to increase the prevalence of ailments. It is argued that the government as the most responsible authority of a country should locate solving these two problems above all to impede

diseases

' distribution. I am completely in agreement with the above-said idea.

This

essay will overlook two reasons that support my notion.

Firstly

, the role that

pollution

plays as a risk factor for

diseases

is blatant.

For example

, waste that factories have released into the oceans has been contaminating many types of marine

habitants

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habitats

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, that not only is affecting those creatures but

also

is

posioning

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positioning

poisoning

humans who are consuming them.

Consequently

, taking measures to solve

pollution

will preserve

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nature and the countries' settlers, which is the main goal for governments.

Secondly

,

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of contiguous

diseases

is more probable to happen in crowded areas.

For instance

, statistics of

dead

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cases due to Covid-19 were higher in cities with higher population concentration during the pandemic, especially in those places where the prevalence of people living on

streets

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the streets

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were

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high, like Mombie.

Thus

, the spread of some

diseases

will decrease with better housing facilities and will result in

the

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better public health, which is the priority of each government. To sum up, the government might be able to overcome many illnesses by

emphesizing

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emphasizing

on

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pollution

reduction and providing housing facilities. I believe that

pollution

is one of

risk

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factors

of

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for

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many medical conditions and poor living situations can exacerbate

spread

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the spread

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of the others, so by concentrating on these two matters, governments keep their people safe.