Many criminals commit crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
There has been a high
rate
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recidivism
around the world. The high Use synonyms
recidivism
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rate
can be the consequence of a lack of support from Use synonyms
society
and a lack of social Use synonyms
skills
. These can be resolved with changes in social attitudes toward Use synonyms
criminals
and with the introduction of a Use synonyms
rehabilitation
system.
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To begin
with, criminal re-offence can be made because they feel they do not belong to Linking Words
society
when they are released from prison. Use synonyms
In other words
, people around them would consider them a risk and try to avoid them. Linking Words
This
would make them feel embarrassed or even furious. Linking Words
In addition
, they do not have any social Linking Words
skills
that can secure jobs. During prison time, they spend their time doing menial work or doing nothing, thereby, the economic situation is getting worse upon release. These two causes definitely are conducive to committing re-offence.
To reduce the Use synonyms
recidivism
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rate
, Use synonyms
society
needs to change. Use synonyms
First
of all, people need to treat Linking Words
criminals
equally without any stereotypes. Use synonyms
Then
, Linking Words
criminals
would feel belonged to Use synonyms
society
and try to become more moral beings. Use synonyms
Second
of all, Linking Words
society
should provide Use synonyms
rehabilitation
programs when they serve their sentences. If they can get access to courses, libraries, and families without any problems, they could develop some Use synonyms
skills
that will help them financially after being released. Use synonyms
For example
, Sweden has the lowest Linking Words
recidivism
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rate
in the world attributable to its well-operating Use synonyms
rehabilitation
programs. Use synonyms
Therefore
, helping Linking Words
criminals
to feel belonged in Use synonyms
society
and to improve their social Use synonyms
skills
while behind the bars would alleviate the criminal re-offence Use synonyms
rate
.
To sum up, prisoners can make other criminal offences upon release because they do not feel belonged in Use synonyms
society
and lack Use synonyms
skills
that can help them be financially stable. To solve the problem, social respect and Use synonyms
rehabilitation
programs should be provided to crime-committed persons so that they can feel belong and develop social Use synonyms
skills
. Use synonyms
This
way, we can resolve a high Linking Words
recidivism
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rate
and prevent Use synonyms
criminals
from committing other crimes.Use synonyms
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