A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. Describe some possible disadvantages. Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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Dear Dhruvi, I hope that you are doing well and excited to go camping in the coming summer. And actually, that's the reason why I am writing you

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letter. First and foremost, I think that you are gonna love

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new adventure in your life as you will get to meet a lot of different people, try new food, learn to build tents, and

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live a completely different life in the forest.

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, let me warn you about some possible hurdles that you may face

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camping. Sometimes

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blockage on the road, you might not get enough water to prepare food and take a shower, so I would strongly recommend you store enough water whenever you can.

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that, as you will be living in the middle of the forest you might experience unpleasant smells and sounds so just be prepared. Now enough about you! I think that I might be able to join you for

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camping holiday if my leave application gets approved by my manager at work. Anyway, with or without me get the most out of these holidays and remember to have fun! Warm regards, Ruchin Patel

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea for improved clarity.

task achievement

Add more details or examples to make the letter richer and more engaging.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriate and contribute positively to the letter’s tone.

task achievement

The writing tone is friendly and suitable for communicating with a friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adventure
serenity
outdoors
refreshing
hustle and bustle
inherent
foster
distractions
cost-effective
unpredictable
wildlife
adequate preparation
physical demands
researching
campsite
lasting memories
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