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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language has serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

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Nowadays, many people tend to emigrate which forces them to speak a foreign
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 may result in critical problems and I completely agree with
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 statement.
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, from the perspective of social issues, the main problem is the lack of quality communication. If migrants are not professional in speaking the local
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, they will not
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 to interact with native speakers properly.
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, they become more and more introverted and have to deal with feelings of loneliness and isolation.
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 is a fact that humans are social animals,
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, a lack of social interaction and friendship is likely to cause depression.
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, a person will not have close friends if he/she cannot express
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/her feelings and thoughts in the local
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,
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,their relationship would remain shallow.
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, misunderstanding probably causes practical issues, especially related to situations in which there is a covert meaning behind a talk or an attitude. Different countries and cultures may
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 in behaviours, customs and beliefs, resulting in various
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 of one situation.
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, one behaviour
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 as laughing out loud or wearing an informal dress at work may be accepted in one country but not in another. Misunderstanding could be originated from a lack of knowledge about the culture of the host country and it will take time to be understood.
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, the migrants will be more and more similar to native populations
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 time if they pay attention to every situation and the feedback from the locals. In conclusion, I agree with the idea that social and practical problems are inevitable in today's world that many individuals live in nations with a foreign
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task response
Your essay addresses the prompt effectively by discussing the social and practical problems of living in a country where one has to speak a foreign language. Ensure to provide more specific examples to strengthen your arguments.
coherence cohesion
Your essay is well-structured with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Make sure to use transition words and phrases effectively to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of your essay.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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