ou had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apologize for the disturbance, which came from my house

last

night. I was hosting a party on the occasion of my birthday. The music was the main cause of the loudness and I assure you that it will not happen again. I realized that I should have organized

this

party at an earlier time of the day and

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I should know how to behave better. I apologise for ruining everyone's sleep and I hope that you may forgive me. I hope you will accept my apologies and I can guarantee that an event like

this

will not happen again. Yours faithfully,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

113 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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