ou had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor complained. Write a letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apologize for the disturbance, which came from my house
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night. I was hosting a party on the occasion of my birthday. The music was the main cause of the loudness and I assure you that it will not happen again. I realized that I should have organized
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party at an earlier time of the day and
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the weekend. As an
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I should know how to behave better. I apologise for ruining everyone's sleep and I hope that you may forgive me. I hope you will accept my apologies and I can guarantee that an event like
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will not happen again. Yours faithfully,
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