Prisons are an expensive way of making bad people worse’ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

If someone does bad, they should receive

punishment

in any way.

Jails

are institutions made by the government to punish criminals, though they have turned out to be bad places, they are still good for

punishment

. In

jails

there are lots of

programmes

and activities that can help prisoners to reform,

also

there are therapy

programmes

that can help with psychological issues which make people turn away from crime.

However

, places of

punishment

should not be luxurious to the extent that people will enjoy being in

jails

than being outside.

Firstly

I would say because of

programmes

which are run in places of

punishment

,

for example

; education

programmes

, therapy, healing and many activities which help prisoners with their mental health, lots of money is invested into the institution making prison expensive to maintain, even if it's for the good cause. Those

programmes

are essential

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because they help some of them when they get released,

instead

of returning to the life of crime, they may reform,

however

not all will live clean lives, but

that is

the goal.

Jails

in Europe are not the same as the ones in Africa. Most

jails

in Africa are not luxurious, while most in Europe have the pleasure of living like they are in some motel. Making many people in Europe not really feel the pain of jail life. African

jails

are very painful, full of hunger, hard labour, and unhealthy living conditions, making them less expensive to maintain. In conclusion, The comparison differs with countries.